[Fan Fiction] [Naruto] [Team Kakashi - Elites]
here is my last Naruto fan fiction. I need a beta-reader for this one. Title: Team Kakashi –Elites Chapter: Multiply Genre: G Rating: G Statute: AU Note: A story flowing different from original plot of Naruto anime/manga. It’s mostly based on Sasuke and Hinata. Chapter 1 Troublesome Children A tall white, wild haired shinobi stepped into the room of Hokage’s secretary. The secretary and another shinobi, who were probably having a chat, looked at him. The two ANBU guards didn’t move from their spots except greeting the new comer with short nods. He was also wearing an ANBU uniform without his mask and weapons. His right eye was covered with an eye-patch and the sleeveless, black shirt’s high neck pulled to cover the bottom of his face including his cheeks and nose. The hands in his trousers’ pockets, he ran a lazy light blue eye over the room. He saw a child about eight or nine years old sitting on the wooden bank at the side of the wall. The child had black hairs and bored black eyes which were checking him uninterested. His short sleeved black shirt’s neck was high and large circling the pale white and thin neck. He wondered how that fabric could stand rigid like that to not fall on the child’s thin shoulders. His black short was knee length and his upper legs were bandaged which were not looking like they were because of an injury. The shinobi guessed he was an academy student seeing the ninja shoes, the child had. He moved towards the table and greeted the other two adults with a nod. “Hokage-sama is busy right now. You have to wait, Kakashi-san,” the secretary told him without asking what he wanted. “But if it’s urgent I …” “I can wait,” the shinobi said and lifted a white brow when some yelling heard from the office behind the big thick doors. “Ah, same as everyday…,” the young secretary waved his hand not minding the noise from the other room. “The troublesome children… as if we don’t have enough problems we also have to deal with these children.” He complained sending a glance to the child in the room. Kakashi turned and looked the child. He didn’t show any reaction. The big, as black as coal eyes were darting from one spot to other on the opposite wall lazily. Some more noise came from the office before it became silent and after some moments the door opened and a little frowning blond boy came out. Because of his thin and small frame he could be mistaken as a six, seven years old. His once white and now grayish shirt was large for him. He had faded black shorts. There were scratches and bruises on his legs and arms. After him a young man came out still apologizing and bowing to Hokage until he closed the door. When the door clicked shut he took a deep breath and turned. His eyes were scary. “Naruto…,” he hissed between clenched teeth. “Err…Iruka-sensei…” the child looked smaller under his teacher’s hard and dangerous looks. Kakashi watched them amused as the pair left the room arguing. While the chuunin teacher dragged the child out by pulling his already red ear he wondered if that ear would be bigger than normal, when the child got older. He heard the child protesting about his punishment saying it was the ANBU’s fault if they fell for his prank. The white haired shinobi noticed one of the guards standing beside the door flinched lightly. Everybody in the room except the other child and himself looked after them disgusted. After the secretary informed Hokage, the other chuunin waiting beside him went in the office with the black haired child. He noticed the Uchiha Clan symbol on the back of the child’s shirt; the only survivor of Uchiha tragedy. “What he did?” he asked to the secretary. That child didn’t look like someone who would do pranks and cause trouble. “Hm.. ah, Uchiha Sasuke?” the young man asked confused for a moment. “He had a fight with some children and injured them badly. Their parents wanted him to be punished. Two children are still in the hospital. With second degree burnt” “Burnt?” “Hai. I heard that child could use some excellent fire jutsus,” he shook his head disbelievingly. “well… he is the brother of that… that demon... you know… People are restless about him. Some thinks he can massacre everybody to test his own power like his elder brother did to their clan. He is only nine but already beating the bigger guys. Think what he can do when he is older and stronger” The villagers of Konoha Gakure were uneasy because Uchiha Itachi, who was murderer of hundreds of people, hasn’t been caught yet. They were also abstaining of the last young Uchiha after what happened in the once famous and great clan. The village was still recovering after the attack of Kyuubi no Yoko and all its loss it shocked a second time with the massacre of Uchiha Clan by its own heir. The people of the village were merciless. They despised and hated the blond guy named Naruto for being jinchuriki of the evil demon. In spite of seeing him like a hero as their previous leader wished they excluded the little child not seeing him as a savior for keeping the demon ineffective inside him. Like Naruto, Uchiha Sasuke was feared and accused guilty because of his brother’s crime. Although he wasn’t hated and excluded openly like Naruto -even some pitied the little guy- he was still not liked by villagers. Kakashi knew how much they could be cruel towards to the people who caused them to feel pain by knowingly or mistakenly. It wasn’t important. There was a knock at the door. It opened slowly and a tiny girl seen hesitant and shy. “Ano…” she spoke timidly. Her big nervous white-pearl eyes were darting from floor to the people in the room. “Yes,” the secretary called annoyed. He sure didn’t like to be bothered with children. “What can I do for you little girl?” “I… uhm… I wa-a-a-nt to talk wi-i-it Hokage-s-s-sama,” she struggled fidgeting with the hem of her shirt. “Why don’t you tell me what it is? Maybe I can help you?” he asked trying to hide his annoyance behind his kind and sweet voice. He leaned forward to hear the girl who was talking low and soft. “uhm…,” the girl looked up hesitantly before she looked away again. “uhm… I… uhm… it’s…” the redness on the cheeks of the girl was increasing with her every effort to tell her problem. “..a-a-a-bout… Sa-a-a-s-ke-kun…”. The secretary looked a little surprised. “What he did?” he asked not minding to hide his annoyance this time. “Huh?” the girl looked up again confused. “I…” before she could continue the door of hokage’s office opened. The black haired child came out. He was looking bored as before. The chuunin followed him out and closed the door behind him sighing annoyed. “Let’s go,” he put his hand over the child’s shoulder who shrugged it off while glaring the girl. The girl flinched back and looked away embarrassed. “So?” the secretary asked to the chuunin while the child walked out the room. “A week home imprisonment.” “That’s all?” “What were you expecting?” he rubbed the back of his neck. “He is just a child.” “Hn.” The secretary snorted. “You know you can say same for his brother too...when he murdered all his family…” when the other shinobi cleared his throat nosily he turned and looked to the girl who was looking towards to the door as if trying to decide leaving or staying. “Hey, girl, you still want to see Hokage-sama.” He asked. “uhmm…” the girl jumped in surprise when she was addressed. “You can wait until Kakashi-san finishes.” She shook her head wildly meaning no and then she ran out. “Children nowadays,” he sighed. “Isn’t she Hyuuga heiress, Hinata?” “Don’t know,” he shrugged. “You can go in now Kakashi-san” “Aa.” End of Chapter 1

Team Kakashi - Elites Chapter 2
Title: Team Kakashi –Elites Chapter: Multiply Genre: G Rating: G Statute: AU Note: A story flowing different from original plot of Naruto anime/manga. It’s mostly based on Sasuke and Hinata. Chapter 2 Treaty The classroom was in chaos. Some guys were wrestling in the middle of the room while some was cheering on them, some -mostly girls- shouting them to stop. A few groups of students were sitting at the middle rows chatting and laughing. At the front of class there was teacher table and a closet beside the huge black board. The desks were lined in two columns rising from front to back at every row. The desks were large enough for four students but mostly they sat in groups of three. The seats were like banks and didn’t have a back to lean. A short, black haired girl was sitting at the end of the last row looking out of the window. A bit away from her on the same desk, there was a guy, who was dozing off in spite of the all disorder around him. His dark brown hair which was tied tightly over his head was looking like a pineapple. At the other last row there was another girl. She had short pink hairs although the long locks were falling over her eyes. She was watching a group of girls who were two rows in front of her, chatting happily and laughing time to time. They were all wearing fancy clothes and their hairs were looking beautiful and well kept. “Are you listening us?” one of the girls glared to the pink haired girl. “N…noo,” she stuttered sinking into her seat. “You know it’s rude to listen to the other people’s conversations!” she scolded her flipping her long shiny black hairs back over her shoulder. “I…I…” the girl blushed looking down her lap with teary eyes. “Forget that weirdo Ayame,” another girl called her friend annoyed. After some more approval from other girls she turned back to her friends to continue babbling. The black haired girl with pearly eyes from the other side watched the pink haired girl whose name was Sakura. She was a loner like herself. But she knew that girl always wanted to like other girls and be friend with them. She didn’t understand how she could want to be accepted by those girls who have always had a reason to tease and look down at her. She turned back to the window ignoring the feeling inside her telling to go and talk with Sakura. She knew she wasn’t wanted there. A fat guy was fighting to save his big bag of chips from another guy with a dog. The little dog was bouncing up and down barking. A blond boy came out from the under of the teacher’s table giggling madly and yelling he was the best. A few paper balls were thrown to him and some students shouted him to shut up. The door of the classroom slid open. The students stopped what they were doing and rushed to their places. After another big chaos and everybody settled behaving at their seats they saw their classmate, Uchiha Sasuke, who had been absent for a week, walking up to the end of the class. Every eye in the class watched him until he sat between the black haired girl and the sleeping boy. Some had envy in their eyes, some jealousy, hate or anger while the popular girls goggled at him. But there was only one question in their minds. Where has he been during the last week? They heard he had a fight with some guys from upper classes and two gennins but nobody knew much about it. Everybody was telling something different about it. After a while the noise increased again. Hinata looked at Sasuke and wanted to say something but couldn’t dare and shut her mouth back turning in front of her. She scratched her fingers with her short nails. She was angry to herself being a coward. Her heart began to beat faster and she knew her face was already red. She took a deep breath and turned him. “Hello Sasuke-kun.” Hinata was cut by a cheerful voice. She looked up and saw a blond girl sitting at the other side of Sasuke. Her greeting was ignored but she didn’t mind pushing the sleeping guy away to sit more comfortable. “Hey!” “Aaah! My potato chips!!!” the fat guy who was sitting on the desk with the pink haired girl yelled angry and sad when he dropped his bag of chips when his friend bumped into him and caused him to lose his grip on his food. “Serves you right! HA HA HA” a brown haired boy who had been fighting with him for some chips laughed. “Bark! Bark!” The fat boy looked into the bag seeing only a few left unharmed. He cried loudly looking to the floor where his yellow, well cooked, delicious chips were fallen. “Shikamaruuuu!!!” “Why the hell you did that Ino?” Shikamaru asked straightening out. He was annoyed hating to be awakened rudely. He glared her before turning to other guy who was whining about his ruined food. “Sorry Chouji. Promise I buy you a new one when the class is over, okay?” “Come one Shikamaru. You shouldn’t buy him unhealthy foods. He is… large enough,” Ino waved her hand lazily eying her fat friend from head to foot. Shikamaru passed to the other desk where only Chouji and Sakura were sitting before. He sighed bored. He just wanted his friend to stop whining. Why Ino was sitting with them anyway? Couldn’t she sit with those other girls who think they were beautiful and wonderful? Of course how could he forget; Uchiha Sasuke was sitting at the same row with them. Every girl in the class had a crush on him but none of them dared to talk or go near him like Ino did. Although she was also ignored like all other girls and was showed cold shoulder she didn’t stop trying to talk with him. Ino, Chouji and Shikamaru were friends since they were very little because of their parents’ friendship. Although Ino was popular she wasn’t like others. She didn’t stop being friends with them after they began academy and she became famous among girls and boys. She was talented, clever and strong, a promising knouchi candidate in the eyes of their teachers. Shikamaru just didn’t like her being chatty and insistent. Everybody fell into silence when -this time- the teacher came in. Everybody stood up immediately while Shikamaru and Sasuke half stood unwilling. After the greeting teacher went to his table and sat down on the chair behind the table. As soon as he sat he found himself on the floor, his legs were on the air. The class broke into a loud laugh. Some snickered behind their hands. Sasuke smirked. The side of Hinata’s mouth twitched and she bit her lip to stop herself from laughing. The white haired teacher frowned angrily and got up. He took a deep breath secretly and turned to the class calm and smiling. “Nice one,” he said cheerfully trying very hard to hide his anger. “I didn’t see it coming,” he cursed for his carelessness. He was already annoyed to see his collogue was praised by the manager of the academy while his all hard work was ignored. “I guess this is one of your doings Naruto,” he looked to the blond boy, who was grinning ear to ear. “Detention this afternoon. I believe you won’t forget else you know I have to ask Iruka-sensei to take care of you.” The boy pouted and glared while the teacher smirked secretly. Sasuke sighed lightly. He was bored. He already knew that theoretical information about jutsus very well. He didn’t need these. He couldn’t go anywhere with this pace. He tapped the rubber on the top of his pencil on his notebook. It was completely blank except starches and dots. He didn’t see any need to note anything during the lesson. He had to put up with it since he needed to be a genin first to be a shinobi and got stronger to reach his goal. He stared to the shape he drew without noticing. He narrowed his eyes and scribbled it hard. He looked around seeing everybody was listening carefully their sensei’s explanations. He saw the pink haired girl was noting down every word coming from the man’s mouth. The fat guy sitting beside her was eating something secretly while his friend sleeping soundly. The blond girl beside him was writing something time to time and nodding now and then to the teacher. He noticed the other girl at the other side of him wasn’t listening either but watching outside from the window. He wished to sit beside the window but she was already there when he came in. Some students were struggling to understand everything at once. The blond guy sitting in the middle rows staring to the black board hard, his brows were knitted in concentration. A few minutes Sasuke continued to watch him. All of a sudden the boy growled in frustration and pulled his blond locks hard. He got up and yelled to teacher that he didn’t understand any thing and asked him to repeat it. Sasuke sighed annoyed. Hinata giggled lightly. Some students groaned and called him an idiot. Sasuke sighed in relief when the class was over. While everybody was in a rush to leave he didn’t move from his seat. Hinata picked up her stuff and put them into her bag slowly eyeing Sasuke. She saw he didn’t respond when Ino said him goodbye and ignored or didn’t notice the shy glances Sakura gave him. When the class became desolate Shikamaru got up to leave with his friend Chouji. “Ano… S.sasuke-kun,” when Sasuke wanted to leave after them, Hinata called him. He stopped and half turned to the girl. “Uhm...” Hinata played with her fingers nervously. She was looking down at some paper on the floor which was stepped on a lot of time. When she noticed Sasuke was leaving she ran after him nearly bumping into him. “Thank you,” she blurted out blushing madly. She had been wanting to thank him for helping her when she was bullied by some guys. Sasuke continued to walk ignoring her. She looked after him undecided and then ran to catch him. He stopped and sighed. He noted he was sighing a lot lately while turning and looking to the stubborn girl who wasn’t getting the hint: leave me alone. “What?” “Ano… I want… uhm.. to learn that-that jutsu you-you did last week.” She said timidly. Sasuke was dumbfounded. “that… that fire jutsu” “Why?” he asked not showing his confusion. The girls asked him to go out with them, offered him gifts and perfectly made lunch boxes but none of them wanted to learn a jutsu. “You are a Hyuuga why you want to know a fire jutsu?” He knew about Hyuuga Clan and their fighting styles. Besides training he was doing a lot of researches and readings about jutsus and fighting at the libraries of the village and his clan. He didn’t remember he met any information about them doing any other kind of techniques beside their own ones which they were very proud of. “uhmm…” Hinata didn’t know what to say. She wanted to train with him because she knew he could help her improve better. After the last training she had with her father she knew she had to do something to please his father at their next workout. She was tired of all those scolds and disgust in her father’s eyes. She was trying to change and get stronger but it wasn’t enough to want it. Her own training wasn’t enough and she needed help. Since she wasn’t good enough and seen as a weakling she was ignored by her own family. “errr… uhm. Curious?” she tilted her head lightly. If she can’t get better at her own league maybe learning something different things she could be more successful. Learning some fire jutsu wasn’t her only purpose to ask Sasuke to teach her anyway. She was intending to learn more from Uchiha prodigy but of course Sasuke didn’t need to know that yet. Sasuke eyed the girl not satisfied by her answer. “Why should I teach it to you?” He was right. Although the fire techniques were common in Konoha Gakure and most of shinobi used them, they are like a symbol to Uchiha Clan. They created most of the fire jutsus and used it as a test to see capacity of someone at being a good ninja in the future. Hinata knew Sasuke’s teaching her that jutsu is same to give the secrets of Byakugan to someone. “I… I teach you taijutsu,” she felt embarrassed when Sasuke looked at her if she was crazy. Of course who was she to teach to the best student, number one of the class taijutsu? “Hyuuga…taijutsu” she began to sweat. Great now she was giving away her family secrets. “What its use to me?” Sasuke asked annoyed. “Are you stupid? I don’t have Byakugan. It won’t be any good to know your taijutsu.” Hinata was surprised he knew about her family’s eye bloodline limit. Nobody in their class knew about it and most of time she was insulted because of her gray eyes which didn’t have pupils. Without Byakugan the attacks of the taijutsu they used wouldn’t be much effective. He was going to leave seeing no sense in the conversation. She would only cause him to lose time and slow down his training. He needed to work hard and use every minute of his time training to get stronger. He eyed the girl with narrowed eyes. He couldn’t copy the ability of Byakugan but Hyuuga’s were close-range combat experts. Their taijutsu was most effective one thanks to their eye bloodline. They could see the inner chakra coil system and chakra points allowing them to shut down their opponent’s chakra flow. He couldn’t do it with his Sharingan. Sharingan could help him to copy techniques, see or hypnotize human targets and observe the movement and flow of chakra but it wasn’t as good as Byakugan’s terms of insight. Sasuke thought maybe he couldn’t develop the ability of Byakugan but learning the style of their taijutsu could be useful. Even if he couldn’t see inner coil system or chakra points of his opponents as clear as a Hyuuga he could memorize the critic points of human being and could perform Hyuuga’s taijutsu gentle fist and more. Even if he couldn’t perform it perfectly as it was he could develop his own style. On the other hand Hyuuga Clan was currently the greatest clan in Konoha Gakure. After Uchiha Clan was destroyed they became more popular. They were very proud of their clan’s bloodline and power. He could beat them if he could learn their techniques. He could defense himself against a Hyuuga better if he knew their moves. “Alright,” he said after a few minutes. Hinata looked surprised. She thought he was going to disagree. “You teach me I teach you,” Sasuke turned and went away leaving a very excited and relieved girl behind. If Hinata wasn’t Hinata she could jump up and down and scream in joy. End of Chapter 2